Cat-e-Log Data Sheet for Brochis splendens
Posted: 02 Mar 2006, 01:54
These are some things you might want to look at on the Cat-e-Log Data Sheet for Brochis splendens:
Under Species Information:
"Mature females and larger and more fuller."
should be are.
Under Habitat Information:
"Open spaces of substrate and rock or wood refuges slightly elevated to provide the shade these fish like to rest under in rare moments of inactivity."
I'd get generous with the commas and do this:
"Open spaces of substrate, and rock or wood refuges, slightly elevated to provide the shade these fish like to rest under, in rare moments of inactivity."
Under Husbandry:
" Boisterous enough to be kept with more dynamic aquaria. "
Perhaps you mean "in more dynamic aquaria." or "with more dynamic aquarium fish." ?
"... amazon river biotope."
Capitalize Amazon River.
If you decide to make these changes, the same should be done where appropriate for B. britskii and B. multiradiatus.
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Deborah
Under Species Information:
"Mature females and larger and more fuller."
should be are.
Under Habitat Information:
"Open spaces of substrate and rock or wood refuges slightly elevated to provide the shade these fish like to rest under in rare moments of inactivity."
I'd get generous with the commas and do this:
"Open spaces of substrate, and rock or wood refuges, slightly elevated to provide the shade these fish like to rest under, in rare moments of inactivity."
Under Husbandry:
" Boisterous enough to be kept with more dynamic aquaria. "
Perhaps you mean "in more dynamic aquaria." or "with more dynamic aquarium fish." ?
"... amazon river biotope."
Capitalize Amazon River.
If you decide to make these changes, the same should be done where appropriate for B. britskii and B. multiradiatus.
*******
Deborah